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Origin Stories

4/17/2016

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Every good hero has an origin story. Often, the stories are rooted in tragedy; family members of heroes-to-be have an alarmingly high mortality rate. Accidents, coincidences, even destiny itself have been known to set a hero on the path to adventure. No matter the details, origin stories all have one thing in common: they bore me to tears.

When Frodo Baggins finally leaves the Shire, or when Harry Potter finally arrives at Hogwarts, then things get interesting to me. I outright refused to see the reboots of Fantastic Four and Spider-Man; I don't need to spend at least half a movie waiting for these mundane characters to turn into superheroes again, having just watched it happen a mere decade ago. Heroes are like meals at a restaurant: I don't mind learning about how they're made, but I don't need to see the whole process every single time. More often than not, origin stories aren't even appetizers; they're the waiter standing there with a tray of food, talking about where it came from instead of serving it to you.

If I want an origin story, I want an origin story. Batman: Year One is one of my favorite graphic novels, despite being nothing but an origin story, because it spends all 96 pages telling a compelling, self-contained tale that just happens to take place earlier in Bruce Wayne's life than we're used to seeing. The path to becoming a hero is the story, not just the first third or half of the story that takes away from the time I could be spending watching Batman be Batman.

That's why I like the first Iron Man movie as much as I do: Tony Stark is Iron Man, and there's no waiting involved to see the character you signed up for. The only difference is that he gets cooler tech as the story progresses. As the movies go on, Tony's origin story continues to play an instrumental role in his development. This is not some one-and-done explanation of how he became a superhero; the shrapnel in his chest and his fixation on building a legacy before he dies are persistent reminders of his origin story. The origin and the story are too intertwined for the former to feel like a roadblock to the latter.

That's why I also like Captain America: The First Avenger, despite it being yet another origin story (set during a time period that's been overdone in film, no less). At first, Steve Rogers is hardly the shield-slinging super soldier he goes on to become, but he's still a hero in his own right. Cap's roots as a scrawny, straight-laced, diehard patriot are essential to appreciating who this character is and what he stands for, and we don't need to wait for him to power up before he starts growing a personality or dealing with conflicts of any real consequence.

Compare this with Star Wars. (Yes, I'm about to criticize Star Wars.) Luke Skywalker lives on a boring moisture farm on a boring rock called Tatooine doing boring jobs for his boring uncle. It's abundantly clear that Luke (and the audience, if the audience is me) desperately wants something—anything—interesting to happen. When adventure finally finds him, there's a transition period where Luke is still a naive, excitable farm boy seeing the galaxy for the first time...and then he's suddenly a confident action hero, with little or no trace of his previous character traits. By the start of the next movie, nothing that happened before meeting Ben Kenobi really matters anymore. It's origin stories like this that drive me mad. Yes, it's important to Luke's character arc to show his progression from an average teenager to the savior of the galaxy, but we don't need to spend so much time with his old friends, adopted parents, and drudgerous life on a moisture farm to understand what he's leaving behind, particularly if the story never refers back to them after a certain point.

A narrative doesn't always need to develop a full backstory for the heroes, nor does it need to present all the backstory in chronological order. Super Mario Bros. for the NES drops you right into the action; there's no time wasted on playing as Mario in the real world for the first few levels so you can appreciate his humble origins as a plumber. Firefly is selective about how its characters' origin stories are conveyed, leaving much of the past shrouded in mystery until it's narratively rewarding to reveal more. In the case of origin stories, I believe that less is generally more; you can always shed more light on a character's past as a story progresses, but you can never give back time spent setting up the story people came to see.

I think the solution may be to drop the "origin story" designation altogether. Just tell one good story, instead of two separate stories that need to be told together. If we learn something about the hero's background in the process, so much the better.
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Systemeth
4/17/2016 04:56:39 pm

You've pretty much nailed it I think on how an origin story should work, in addition to there being far too many of them. I do disagree with your assessment on A New Hope though. Luke is basically flying by the seat of his pants for pretty much the whole film until the "switched off his targeting computer" scene. He's only particularly any degree of confident when nothing's going on, but when shit goes down he's excitable, almost frantic. Watch the way he shoots his blaster compared to Han (or even Leia) for example. Also, his past life still comes up late in the movie "I used to bullseye womprats in my T-16 back home, they're no bigger than 10m." or with his reunion with Biggs. Not to mention that Biggs straight up dies during the Death Star assault. During the assault you can still see vestiges of his past life before he does the trench run, doing shit like uselessly firing at the space station's surface (again almost frantically). His evolution to a more confident action hero is done throughout the film rather than instantly.

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Nathaniel link
4/17/2016 06:48:14 pm

Thanks! You make some fair points, and I've revised the paragraph a little. In the original draft of this post, I had a second paragraph further fleshing out my viewpoint, but I didn't want this to turn into a specific critique of Star Wars in the middle of a general post about origin stories.

One of the things I mentioned in the original draft was that specific line about bullseyeing womp rats—it's a nice connection to his previous life, but I feel it would have been more productive to SHOW us that. The movie does a fair amount of "tell, don't show" in the first half. I also mentioned that his experience as a moisture farmer never comes into play, Lars and Beru never come up in conversation again, and you'd never guess that Luke grew up as a backwater farmer if you just watch Empire and Jedi. Speaking as someone who has family who grew up on a farm and went on to be world travelers, and extended family who lost a parent far too early, these are the kinds of things that absolutely still surface from time to time, no matter how far away a person gets from their roots.

Aside from that, I flat-out forgot about Biggs dying in the trench run, despite having seen the movie multiple times. I don't know what it is about his character, but he simply does not leave a lasting impression on me. I always remember him as the random guy in the Yavin hangar who recognizes Luke, not the childhood friend who went off having adventures first.

I still contend that the transition into action hero isn't entirely gradual, though. One kiss from a pretty girl, and suddenly he's swinging across bottomless chasms like a pro. ;)

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Systemeth
4/18/2016 08:00:53 pm

I can agree more with that. The movie is indeed pretty guilty of telling over showing. It is also a bit egregious that you'd never really be able to tell about Luke's previous life from watching Empire and Jedi. Even Jedi only has the one throwaway line between Luke and Han on Tattooine where the former says (almost lamentably) that there's nothing to see while the latter's still blind from hibernation sickness. But I would say that's more on Empire/Jedi than it being ANH's fault, is all.

Still, my main point was that his transition wasn't instantaneous due to things I've already stated. But I can concede it's not necessarily AS gradual as I'd said. It's somewhere in between I guess. Using your example, when he swings across the chasm, it's not just because of the kiss. In fact, the kiss surprised him. He had already made the choice to go for it (has the idea, throws the grapple, etc.) and she basically kisses him to help steel his nerves for the actual act.

When next we see him, it's him being stunned at Obi-Wan's confrontation and subsequent "powerup" and then he's depressed until the TIEs show up. During which he's back to being very excitable again, rather than confident.

But in any case, you get what I mean even if you don't necessarily agree.


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